Dancing Without You

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London artist and poet, Elle Smith evokes those feelings of loneliness of a relationship passed, in this original poem called 'Dancing Without You'. Although, this poetry is about sadness, it is also nostalgic as imagery is conjured like magic:

 

Dancing Without You - Original Poem by Elle Smith

 

Dancing Without You 

 

Dancing and spinning,

now alone without you.

My world has crumbled,

as I feel lonely and blue.

We twirled and my heart

gently floated on air.

Within your strong arms,

I had no worry or care.

It was like being wrapped,

in bubbles of cotton wool.

You were my comfort,

as a blanket or even a snood.

The cold world outside,

disappeared and was not there.

You holding me tightly,

is simply beyond compare.

~~~ 

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4 Responses

Taylor
Taylor

October 06, 2016

It’s always nice to have those arms where you forget about all your troubles. I definitely know about the pain that comes with those arms leaving. Excellent poem!

Hannah
Hannah

October 01, 2016

This is beautiful! I can completely relate to the feelings in this poem and it’s beautifully said. My favorite line is: “in bubbles of cotton wool”, so descriptive and it really gives you a sense of what it feels like to be in love and feel comfortable. Great portrayal of these feelings. Definitely one of my favorite poems I’ve read in a really long time.

Elle Smith
Elle Smith

August 31, 2016

Hello Abbott, I am sure that you DID make someone feel like this :)
All the best,
Elle

Abbott Brush
Abbott Brush

August 30, 2016

Oh Elle. That’s beautiful. You can be a real heart ripper. That’s beautiful too.
I hope I made somebody feel like that. That’s being a good … a real man.

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